I was going to bring this up. Shiro, you have a bad tendency to make stuff up, I've been very lenient on it the whole subject, so this is what I have to say. I made the RP, I control anything that isn't yours. You have Tach'ri, and your little companion. I'd like to see you just go with what I write, and work with it, but don't take it as far as making the characters do things they would, couldn't, or shouldn't do. That is playing god, my friend :P
Oh, and please look at this:
'I find it insulting to be proclaimed useless' thought Tach'ri.
He saw the mog be attacked, and was amazed at the accuracy. He went around the bend, attempting to try and do the same to one of the snipers. On his way, he was spotted,
"Hey, YOU! WHO ARE YOU!"
Tach'ri kept moving, thinking nothing of it. Maybe it was someone else.
"I SAID YOU! YOU LITTLE DOG THING!" (this is a hume of ivalice, he is companions with a nu, he'd know what it was :P)
That pissed him off. He saw a human like male come at him. (human like? it is !
) He knew he had to do quick work of it. The human was slow, his large blade came down on the grass, and before he could get it up Tach'ri was behind him. (This a low level guild mission, this soldier couldn't carry blade that big.)
"Never again will you call me a dog," said Tach'ri, and with one stroke of his blade, the human spoke no more. (<-that first part would've been great if you stopped there
)
All in all, I just want to see people really writing, reading each post carefully, planing their attack, then executing it.
Then I want to see my sorry ass replying to it. Faster than normal. I'm eager to read lengthy replies, so don't feel shy. Make a basic reply, then modify it while I'm logged off so when I come back, I come back to some good looking paragraphs. You've all come a long way from that first mission, but it's not over yet...not yet!
ps-feedback time! Is this RP the worst evar? or is it a little better than that?!
I want to know what would make this better!
Oh, and I'm hoping everyone supports me in my new campaign: Role Playing Forum Mod
I hope it's achievable. I sit here all day all night waiting for nothing really. The sun to burn out, you know. Might as well chill here while it dies...
thanks thanks thanks!