I quite like the concept, the story line is a little different from the norm which is good. I like your map graphics, especially if they are all going to be like that, they remind me of Monkey Island 3.
The battle system, i'm guessing that you were a little inspired by the battles from Grandia? Thats not a bad thing as the battle system in Grandia 2 was one of the best i've ever played; if its not from that then sorry, its just pretty simillar!
One thing i am slightly dubious on is the Censorship Troops, while they might do that job, in a world thats supposed to be harmonious and perfect surely they would be called something less in your face..?
I'd imagine that the people of the world are led to believe that the troops are there for their own protection, not to censor them.
Overall i like this project and intend to keep an eye on it! Congrats
Edit: And i'm also completely stupid and didn't notice the many pages of replies already! If i've said whats already been said or changed... sorry!