The hero in my game

[Sieghart]

i editted out Nakkuruman's Charset:p
and made this out of his:D
http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/3731/siegbi7.png[/IMG]
its the hero's charset in my project
heres the battler that used by that charset
http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/7629/sieghart8gu.png[/IMG]

what do you think i should improve
to make them look alike?
and do i sprite good?O_o

Please dont use my charset ryt now
or edit the body Though you can edit the hair but make your own body xD
not try to be mean but i just wanted to have an original charset for my own game
after i released the game
anybody who is interested can use it:thumb:
with further credits to Nakkuruman for the hair and Me for the Body Sprite

Hoping for good Responses

Sieghart,^_^

 

[Kuri$u]

Hehe, that looks cool.
The character (Battler) is from Chaos Legion, which is one of my favourite game.
^_^ You've done a good job spriting it.

 

[Gustave]

Sieg! (Or Zieg) That looks beautiful, makes me feel like making a XP version of CL good luck with it, looks reall good.

 

[Sieghart]

thanks for the feedbacks
im thinking of creating a Vincent Delacroix and the legions charset

in the sieg charset
what should i improve?
or is it enough?

 

[Samboy]

I think it is enough. Theres not much else you can do. Good job. In fact, very good job.

 

[Siege]

I can't see it.

 

[Sieghart]

you can't see it?
thats wierd
others can see it also me,
try viewing it at this page
copy below::
http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/3731/siegbi7.png

 

[Siege]

nope still can't.

Can you try a different host please, i always seem to have trouble with imageshack these days. Maybe http://www.tinypic.com

 

[Sieghart]

okay here it is
the CH i made
http://i9.tinypic.com/2cickjl.png[/IMG]
The basis BA from CL(ChaosLegion)
http://i15.tinypic.com/2cy5jyh.png[/IMG]
what do you think?

 

[Siege]

Wow that is really good, i think you have managed to get every part of the outfit into the sprite. Really well done.

 

[Sieghart]

i see i think im not going to edit it more further
everyone saids so
hehehe
thanks for the comments guys

 

[green raven]

it's a nice sprite, 'nough said, I'm dropping your request

 

[Sieghart]

sorry to bother you Green Raven though
you can make me the Down Sprite instead
or the other Action sprite of sieghart
though im not that quite good at editing
your more experienced in moving the sprite to make actions out of them
so would you care to take that request instead?

 

[green raven]

sure
http://i15.tinypic.com/2d8qgeb.png[/IMG]
don't comment on this

 

[Jason]

Seig, I just saw something on your charset, on the top row, he has red eyes, but on the others he has blue eyes, maybe you should change that ?

Nevermind, it was just the eyebrows lol, silly me

 

[Gustave]

one thing i did notice is that sieg from CL doesn't has is vest closed, in that sprite set though, it is closed.

 

[Sieghart]

Seig, I just saw something on your charset, on the top row, he has red eyes, but on the others he has blue eyes, maybe you should change that ?

Nevermind, it was just the eyebrows lol, silly me

http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/3245/siegbi7rr5.png[/IMG]


heres the fixed one
the eyebrows should look red too
thanks for noticing that little mistake
hehehehehe

one thing i did notice is that sieg from CL doesn't has is vest closed, in that sprite set though, it is closed.

its just look like it was closed
but it is open
take a look at the side view
i just want it to look at that way when it is in front view