Rose Memories

[Sonata]

This is looking good, with some polish this could be a great game.

The Chamber is burning!
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That fire looks great, is that your work?

 

[BlackWings]

I'm glad this game is coming along nicely , here are a few notes.

-  The CMS looks wonderful ... is that the gold icon in the lower right? cuz there's a lot of space between it & the number ... you could move the number a little to the left so it doesn't touch the border.

-  The chamber in flames screenshot looks really good but i feel that the flame to the upper right is out of place.
[it looks like it's going above the ceiling & a little of it touches the other side of the room]

I hope these small notes help you in making the game better ... release the demo already xD

 

[OrigamiRose]

Im not going to rush with the demo. I rather don't want to go back and fix bugs

New screenshot from the came, that isn't a piece of a church xD

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@Money: The flames are made by a member on RMRK. The map is made by me.

Also, I've been thinking more about the encounter system. In these spirits, you will only meet non-human enemies. On the maps, you will see humanic creatures. Some of them could be helpfull characters, or some could be enemies. There's no way to see the difference.

 

[Gray]

The maps.... Look great....
The mouse system.... looks great...
Why does everything looks so great?  :crazy:

 

[Luminier]

Doc Spoc, please refrain from making one-liner posts. They are annoying, and not helpful, and I'm sure that Black Shadow would rather you tell her/him what you like about the game rather than just saying "ownage". Besides, it's spam, which is against the rules.

While I'm here, though, I may as well compliment you, Black Shadow, on your nice custom artwork, and lovely mapping. Although, your English could use some work, it's still quite good for a non-native speaker.

 

[sillypieman]

I am very impressed.  And I love that you're using the mouse.

I don't really have anything negative...although I didn't fully read through the story and characters sections.

 

[Cheeze]

I've seen some mapping errors. On the top of the forest one, you put two of the same tree tiles right next to each other, and on the far left, you didn't finish the bush off correctly

Another Error-ish thing that i've seen, Is that all your NPC's are basically the same    :huh:

But other than this, You are kicking ass!

 

[Tansred]

Can the game be played completely with point and click?

 

[OrigamiRose]

Another Error-ish thing that i've seen, Is that all your NPC's are basically the same    :huh:

Could you explain that a bit more. What makes them basically the same?

Also, the mapping errors ahas been fixed a long time ago^^

Also, new screenshots:

Enter The Cave(Im aware of a small error in this map, but the error is fixed^^)
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Mini-Game finished :D
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Explaining on the mini-game:For those who have played Frogger before,you will recognize this. Basicly, you climb down a tall cliff, and on the sides, there's bats that will do anything to smack you down! Mean bats ;_;
Each time you've been striked by a bat, the Health Bar decrease, and when it's empty, it's either that you start from the beginning of the map, or it's game over. I haven't decided yet.

 

[Cheeze]

Like, they are all knights...or the dude in the knight costume with grey hair, and then the girl citizens are the same aswell if i remember correctly

 

[OrigamiRose]

The dude with the grey hair is a girl^^

All of them has different classes. Micka is a Sword Dancer,Adam is an Assassin, Rose is a Warrior and Chirsty is a Wizard. I don't know why you connected them all to be knights.

And no, the grey haired girl and the citizen aren't the same.

 

[monkeydlu]

lol, I thought that would've been fairly obvious XD I mean, with the boobs and all x.x

I don't think he's talking about the npcs in your description, I think he's saying that all the npcs in your screenshots are generic, I don't see anything wrong with that though. 

 

[OrigamiRose]

Ah, now I understand what he means. It took me forever to understand what he meant xD. Sorry about that Sleeping Cheeze^^.

I know that it isn't that realistic, still, that's the kind of "uniform" they use. All guards uniforms (or armors, call it what you want :shades look the same. Some people don't like it, and some does.

I could go and make 5 types of that sprite with different hair colours, but I don't priority that right now.

 

[Brandonn]

I'm confused about your story.

You say the magic people go through generations of descrimination, and this causes them to go off and create a land on their own. But you also say that this new land is their birthplace and the start of the magic.


Also, magic is used agianst Rose, but humans can't use magic, so why is a magic person paralizing Rose?

 

[OrigamiRose]

Also, magic is used agianst Rose, but humans can't use magic, so why is a magic person paralizing Rose?

The answer is simple:

Rose heads into the Nocturne mansion, to find Morghad surrounded by flames. In front of her, two men stands. The Prince of Braskan, and his loyal servant, Brask. 

Brask
Age:30
Race:Unknown
Brask used to live in Nocturne, but was banished, becuase his evil intations.
There's not so much info about Brask. Most Magians says that he isn't Magain,
and isn't human. His race is unknown.
After Brask got banished, he was taken care of by the old Emperor of Braskan,
who was still unknown of Brasks powers. Brask was later caught in the act by
the emperors evil son, Aristomenus, The Prince Of Braskan. Together, they
decided to overthrown the old Emperor, and give the power to Aristomenus.
Brask is pure evil, and extremly intelligence. His knowledge
of magic is often used in the wrong way, and leads to many ends if lives.

 

[Brandonn]

oh, very good. Thank you

 

[OrigamiRose]

I've been taking a break from the game for 1 month, but Im still working on this =)

Update with Screenshot :3

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