Hearts of Shadows

[Marzat]

Improved Screenshots

 

[baniff]

Inside the house isn't bad, except for the window in the top-left corner is on a beam.

 

[Marzat]

added a picture of Roa Town in the screen section

 

[JakeyZombie]

Luminier has given you a breakdown on what you need to do to improve this project, there's really nothing else to say. Instead of working on maps, and things of that ilk, you might want to put some more thought into your characters. There are numerous character templates, and tutorials on adding depth to characters lying around the internet. Your story is atrocious in my opinion, it seems like a handful of ideas all strung together awkwardly, and that new screenshot you posted has a couple of mapping errors, that I can instantly see, and a really ugly fog effect. There are a few really good mapping tutorials in the tutorials section, and you can always take inspiration from other people's projects.

Sorry.